Can someone look over my essay please

Hello I wrote an essay using everything I learned from the fiveable cram live stream.Could someone please look over it and give me some feedback and a numerical score.

Here is the prompt I used(2020 pratice)

Here is my essay feel free to butcher it

Hey there! We covered this specific prompt in Cram 7. If you check your file, I made a few comments.

Thank you very much

In the morning before the exam will reading of essays still be occurring?

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