Could Someone Please Read My DBQ?

Could someone read my DBQ and let me what points I would receive if any? I’d appreciate any feedback.
Practice DBQ question

My DBQ

You definitely would get the thesis point, though it is a bit long-winded. It’s not a bad argument but it does ramble a bit back and forth, so it was a little difficult to track. Probably a 6/10 or so

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@Darin_Roodman
Sorry to bother you again but what were the specific points I would get?

not a bother, that’s what I’m here for!

Let’s see, definitely describing docs and using at least 2 to further your argument. Maybe one outside evidence point and one sourcing point. I hope that helps!

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Okay, thank you!

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