Feedback help!

Could I get feedback on my essay to the 2001 prompt? Specifically, the body paragraphs because I have troubles connecting back to my thesis and having a line of reasoning. Any feedback would be appreciated! Thank you so much!


I have two key pieces of feedback for you:

  1. Make sure to have two quotes with analysis for each body paragraph.
  2. You can expand your analysis of each quote by explaining how the audience would likely respond. (“As a result, Pierce would likely…”)

Thank you so much!

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