Could I get feedback on my essay to the 2001 prompt? Specifically, the body paragraphs because I have troubles connecting back to my thesis and having a line of reasoning. Any feedback would be appreciated! Thank you so much!
I have two key pieces of feedback for you:
- Make sure to have two quotes with analysis for each body paragraph.
- You can expand your analysis of each quote by explaining how the audience would likely respond. (“As a result, Pierce would likely…”)
Thank you so much!