does this earn the thesis point?: By emphasizing how little action has been taken to resolve this issue, and then emphasizing the desperate need for more action, Thunberg argues that those involved in monitoring climate change must take more drastic measures to acknowledge this issue and that as climate change prevails, it will result in detrimental impacts on society. She engenders a frustrated and vexed tone in order to portray to the UN that as climate change continues and no drastic action is taken, the young generation is being deprived of a meaningful future.
Yes, this would receive the thesis point.
The first sentence gives you the thesis point, and it outlines your argument as
B1 - emphasizing how little action has been taken
B2 - emphasizing the desperate need for more action