Would this be a good thesis?

I used choices instead of devices for paragraphs, but listed the devices for an example. should I just have left the devices out?

Grimke creates a mood of urgency, suggesting an activism against slavery by all people, questioning the institution itself, by using the repetition of key phases and rhetorical questions, all appealing to the pathos of the text.

Two pieces of feedback for you:

  1. You don’t need to mention the devices here since you mention the strategies - that is enough.
  2. I’d make sure to clearly state the author’s purpose in your thesis.
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